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I am....

I am the godmachine that feeds on souls,
I am the ever thirsty parasite,
I am the harbinger of doom,
I am you....
Just look in the mirror...
And see the face of wrath,
For I hold the power of destruction,
It lies in the palm of one hand,
In the other I hold fear,
Waiting to unleash the power,
That makes the angels cringe,
I am the destroyer,
Those who love life fear...
The reaper....
With the indescriminate sythe,
And the flames of terror,
Apocalypse draws nigh,
As the screams grow ever louder,
Time to prey for redemption,
Alas there's none in sight,
So laugh out loud and mad,
For inevitablity will crush,
Between the blackend palms,
Of wrath and fear...

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Look it grows like a poisonous thorn

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  • pijanbalkan
    August 7, 2008
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    grrrrrrreeeeaaaaaaatt
    i like it the way it looks ineluctable...


  • Ravensdark
    July 9, 2008
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    Seems as if this abberation is getting more severe.....


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 26, 2008

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    A very dark and powerful write. In-your-face imagery seething throughout. Very intense, and certainly a bit chilling. Nicely done!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    Cool! Yeah, you should play with it and do one of your longer fabulous writes!!


  • greyhaime
    May 14, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Very interesting piece here. and yes we are our own and others worst enemies sometimes. thanks for sharing this with us here,well done and if you need any help with the site please feel free to let me know and I'll help how ever I can.
    Keep it flowing.
    cheers
    Grey
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