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Don't lose faith

Cold as ice,

Pale as a ghost,

Remembering the the good times,

And all the bad times,

Laughing and Crying,

You gave me some advice,

"Don't you dear lose faith,

For it will crush you like a rose",

That was your last words,

Before you died,

You see I have'nt lost faith,

The only thing I have lost is you.

Author notes

A close friend died not to long ago...I'm still down about it,...But thoughts are the last words she ever said to me...and I'm still keeping my faith though its small.

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  • hahakindaguy
    May 17

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    Is line seven supposed to be "don't you DARE lose faith"?
    Just thought I'd ask, sorry.
    On another note I really enjoyed the write, the last two lines were well thought out

  • going nowhere
    May 16

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    i thought this was beautiful... advice from ones we love it seems we cling to after they die...
    wow... i read it again and now i'm in tears... definitely a sad piece. good luck in the contest.