He slams me against our kitchen wall,
His hands firmly on my hips
while he kisses me deeply.
His faded blue jean
thigh digs into me
as his kiss teases my neck.
His strong hands,
grasp my shoulders,
as our lips fight it out.
The coarse hair on his
lips, soften with
the wetness of our love.
He rips open
my white blouse,
buttons scatter.
My lacey red bra,
stretched tight across my breasts
barely hides my aching nipples.
I wrestle off his shirt,
and flick open his belt,
undoing his eager button.
Zipper slowling sliding over
his taught treasures-
I let out an eager gasp.
No need to slide off my skirt,
I wrap my legs around his waist
One deep thrust and we're one.
As he holds tight my ass,
His hot face is in my breasts,
My naked back against the wall.
Squirming, Squealing and Shaking
My nails drag down
his neck and over his back.
My legs squeezing around him,
As I'm bouncing on his cock,
His hands tugging my hair as I scream out his name.
His hot tongue slides down my neck,
His teeth press hard into my flesh
I tremble as he explodes into me.
I collapse over him,
And he wraps his arms around me,
Slowly carries me in, and nuzzles me into bed.
Goodnight, My Love.
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Comments
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Whew!!
One lucky guy there!! So F'ing hot!!
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hmmm
pretty good...THANKS -
Wow. It's like you have to have it so bad and it's rough sex and then in the end you go to bed, and it's soft and gentle. Amazing. Great job and good luck.
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Did I read this wrong or in the 4th stanza did you say he had hairy lips?? Hot passionate and unexpected! Those are the best kind of encounters!! My hubby and I walk often around our favorite lake. He has this trick he does that while we walk hand in hand, he stops walking and swings my hand behind my back and it pulls me in for a kiss! Startles me everytime!!!
Mylee -
Very nice, I dont think this is over the top. I dont think you can get over the top on here, just more reads as erotic writes tend to get many peeping toms
Oh, please dont mind my binoculars
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I need a cigarette
Oh my. To be a fly on the wall to that encounter. It was an awesome read, and made me want to keep reading. LOVE IT!
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Wow....a really hot piece!
hands squeezing the sexy hips
shower of kisses
teasing the neck
hands groping...
grasping your pretty shoulders
your white blouse is ripped open
the buttons scatteryour lacy red bra is stretched tight across your milk white breasts
barely hiding your aching strawberries...
you wrestle your lover's shirt
flicking open the belt
undoing the eager button
You don't wait for the skirt to be slid off
but wrap your long, sexy legs around your lover
One deep thrust and both of you are one
your beautiful ass is being held tightly
your frarant breasts are being licked
while your naked back is against the wall
squirming...
squeaking...
shaking...
your nails drag down your lover's neck and back
Your pretty legs are squeezing the lover
screaming the lover's name
your neck is licked and tasted by a hot tongue...pressing hard into your flesh
making you tremle as the explosion takes place
You collapse over your lover
and soon you're carried to a warm bed...waiting anxiously to touch your soft naked pretty body!
Oh my....what an encounter...
I wish I could see all this happen...
Alas! I'm too far away!
I loved your openness, your 'lustfulness', your hot actions and reactions, honey!
You're such a sexy cat, my love!
Kisses.....
Galaxy2
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ooops wrong door!
uh nice work! ( blushing !)was jus looking for the broom!
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This was a really good piece, you could feel the rhythmn of what you were decribing and it climaxed and then slowed, when you went in to sleep
amazing technique to have
amazing write.. good luck in the contest
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Sounds like a great evening,
only I like a bowl of cereal before bed...lol
What can i say....i need a new computer chair.
You have a flare for erotica...it has a point of impact..
An orgasmic head on collision....
Slick and gripping....dripping with poetic satisfaction.
Bravo gypsy!
LIAM.
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Oh hell yeah !
This is a little on the hard core side of erotic, but has my attention. We all need it this way sometimes good for our release of pent up ... everything
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