I live everyday
Unsure of who I am
Unable to comprehend
Why God does this to me
A contest entry
- Something different by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 14, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes by vampireprincess.
315 points, ended June 25, 2008, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This poem is short, I do not think this is finished. I think it could have something added to it.
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It's a little short. I feel like perhaps you could add a bit more to develop the idea more clearly. But other than that I thought it was pretty good. Pretty meaningful. So good job and Good luck in my contest.
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A very relative piece... x
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