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Romance is in Season

Summer
kisses, ignites
passion within lovers.
Winter bliss opens doors for two,
Romance!
 

Come dance,
Just you and I
turning it up tonight.
Within the hearts of these lovers,
Romance.
Spiraling around, we lose thoughts
Only existence, us.
Passion brought forth,
Romance.

Spring brings
Sweet pleasures on.
Flowers bloom, sweet scents rise,
Tap dancing through the fields
Playfully enjoying our life.
Romance.
Fall leaves
Behind a soft touch of passion.
As colors change then fall,
We renew growth
Romance.

Author notes

Prompt: The Seasons


Each entry should have the following:

1 Cinquain

1 Butterfly Cinquain

1 Mirror Cinquain


All must be connected by the prompt

regular cinquain: fiveline syllabic verse: 2, 4,6,8,2,
reverse cinquain: five-line syllabic verse of the pattern 2 / 8 / 6 / 4 / 2
mirror cinquain: a sequence of a standard cinquain followed by a reverse cinquain
butterfly cinquain: nine-line syllabic verse of the pattern 2 / 4 / 6 / 8 / 2 / 8 / 6 / 4 / 2

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    Beautifully done! Romance is in the air!


  • Griswold silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    Very well done sweetheart, I knew it would be stunning posted, the color changes are a very good touch for the seasons baby. Love you...Scott


  • Intricate Wordsmith
    May 14, 2008
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    That was very interesting. . .Thank you for writing that and sharing that with the world


  • ShelleyA gold member
    May 14, 2008
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    A good write. Good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Perfect form in your cinquain and butterfly cinquain. Line and syllable count in your mirror cinquain is off. Other than that, well done. Thank you for your entry.