In the dark clouded sky of a selfish world
every so often a rare star can be found.
It shines brighter than the others
over powering the dusky gloom around it.
It's brilliant light warms the hearts
of all those it touches,
and once again reminds the world
that not all have become tarnished,
there are still gleaming beacons among us
In a list
A contest entry
- -kaleidoscope- Menagerie by Cerulean Sunrise.
1850 points, ended May 19, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful work for her.
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Glad that you like, she is most deserving of it ~Bret~
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Wow...this is stunning. Thank you so much. I love my background and new tag!
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Aww hun this is truly a beautiful write.. I just meet her tonight and she has such a sweet soul.. this is so true about her as well.. Your such a talented soul.. Beautiful hun *hugs*
Angel
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That is so touching and genuine!! She is a fabulous writer.. and no doubt a fabulous soul!
What a beautiful dedication!
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INdeed Brett
Some days we see as if everyone who walks this earth are tarnished...but you know what, in a sense hon, we all are. We are not perfect, we all have flaws
Its just a matter if you use yourself to prosper and help be the light others need or to make themselves worse and remain in darkness. But eventually, a light will shine on them as well. One Man, forever shines, no matter how tarnished we become.
Great write honey.
Love
Passions
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Love, C
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