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Bright Eyes

Bright brown eyes
Look out
From beneath my hair,
As I stop to stare at you.

My breathing becomes quick,
As my heart jumps up in my chest,
My thoughts become of only you,
For a little while.

I try to smile,
When sense comes back to me.
I try to act,
Like you don't affect me...

Do you notice,
Do you stare too?
I always stop short,
Wishing I was with you,
Instead of on my own,
In the crowded hallway
Getting shoved out of the way...

I wish I was with you,
And your lovely face,
I wish,
I was the object,
Of your intelligent,
And emotional
Gaze.

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  • Nikki Rowles
    June 9, 2008

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    AHHH IT'S AWESOME...I can so relate...I love this...thank you for entering good luck...well written
    ~*~An Unwritten Truth~*~


  • Sweet-Pea7
    May 13, 2008
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    AHHH I LOVE IT!