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Renae- A Source of Light!

Renae-You know that song " Jesus Loves Me"
Well its true.
Jesus loves you.
The message still shines through
And He is there for you.

Renae-Think of all the wonderful things,
Like butterflies, and tinkerbell
"CLAP IF YOU BELIEVE!"

Renae- your probably wondering
What the kids are doing
Back at school,
but remember you'll be there soon too.

Just hold on a little longer,
Say another prayer or two.
And you'll get better.

Just remember,
When your sad,
Gather up your teddy bears,
And imagine being in Neverland
With Tinkerbell and Peter Pan!

Author notes

Dear Heavenly Father, I thank you for this day,for just everything that this world takes for granted sometimes. I thank you for this little girl Renae, and her illness Lord.I pray that you just overwhelm her with Your love and your strength Lord. And that she feels Your presence in her life. Lord, I thank you for the person that you sent to tell us about Renae. I thank you for Jared, Lord, and his selflessness Lord. I pray that You continue to bless him in all he does.  Continue to show Your healing power to Renae Lord, and continue to show her Your love.
In Your Name,
Amen


This prayer will only take a second to recite, or even say your own, but in the bible, it does say when 2 or more are gathered in HIS name, there HE is in the midst of them.  So lift her up to the Lord. The One who heals!!!


Written December 21st, 2003

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  • Nintendo
    January 22, 2004
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    What a blessed write omg so good keep it up

  • prairiegal gold member
    December 27, 2003
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    lovely, pretty, uplifting,anointed

    This was such a blessing to read and so anointedly done, including the prayer for little Renae. I've been out of the loop(do not know of this child's illness). I'll pray for her and her family. I pray the Lord, provided her comfort in her dreams. Good work and I'm sure it was a Blessing to this little girl. God Bless You for the time you took to try and lift her and family. Pretty, always sad for a Grandma to know of any ill children. Children weigh heavy on this heart,always. Lord, protect all the children far and near.
    Edited on Dec 27, 9:15 p.m. because 'typos'.


  • finding myself 84
    December 25, 2003
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    Wow... this brought tears to my eyes! Bless your sweet heart! Renae will absolutely love this! Good luck with the contest! sonya


  • glazecovered
    December 22, 2003
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    I like the repetition of little girl's name at the beginning of each stanza, and how you played around with all of her favorite things. This is very sweet.


  • queenie
    December 21, 2003
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    reflective

    you did a great job of focusing on renae.this is about her and you made sure that it reflects things of her world.good write,good work.


  • Saab
    December 21, 2003
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    This was awesome, Manda! She'll love it! I like how you incorporated all her favorite things into it. You did a great job with that. I don't see how it's shaky, but you think what you want to think Great job, good luck, and God bless! -Saab

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