your lines have become barren
in contrary bypass
broken syllables beat
jaded ear drums far
where echoes reminisce
and duty bound
my derelict
soul shrivels in suffice
as pacified
by my discrepancy
A contest entry
- Quicke 10/10/1(Prompts Are Up) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 14, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow...what a ride...outstanding language and the flow is so good...another fun one for the tongue and the lips...vivid, unrestrained images rise from this...play out like fast-forward crystal. love it
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the word choice is amazing. I reallyy enjoyed this.
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Thank you very much.
Will host immidiatly.
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