They dusted fossils,
linking yesterday
with evidence;
of our evolution.
Author notes
creation.
A contest entry
- Quickie 10x10x10 by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great poem. I love Darwin. You said a lot in few words.
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If you could hear my claps they would boom down the mountains of the gods in olympus and shower Zeus in a sedimentary shower of shame...
This was truly awesome, you write like one of my friends does. One of his poems literally consisted of two swear words and was named 'how i feel'
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i love how you used so fear of words, yet you spoke so boldly and loudly. well done on such a great write! I enjoyed reading it!
Luke
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I like the simple truth within this piece. It is short and very much to the point, but it still has enough content to "fill a reader up" I like the tone beneath your work. There are deeper levels to comprehend beyond the obvious written. Great job and congrats on your trophy. Hope it felt good to win it
Love
Carrie
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I like this thank you for taking the time to enter my contest have a great evening best wishes and much luck
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Best of luck.
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