You featured those favors
vanity seeks to hold firm
then emptied true beauty
with lost passion torn
by bitter rejection
not so much your own
as greedy self interest
would have it be so
& wearily I grew to hate
the slow pace you turned old
Author notes
Prompt: ignored
A contest entry
- Quicke 10/10/1(Prompts Are Up) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 14, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Brilliantly written... I have my own take on it...
But oohhh I am completely intrigued by this write!! I want to know your thoughts behind it!! (I'm sooo nosey
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You sure know how to write bro!!!
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DAMN!
~standing ovation~
BRAVO!
MORE, MORE!!!!!
~still shaking head~
EXCELLENT!!!!!!
<<< is at a loss for proper words here!
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Nice attitude... lol
This sounds like me at both perspectives.
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such emotion. Great work. Ii loved it.
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