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My Last Breath

Life lived
Love give
Passionate embraces
Upon life's
Final stages.

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Prompt~ Creation or My last breath

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  • penman gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful take on the prompt. Thank you for sharing.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    I really like this thank you for taking the time to enter my contest have a great evening much love always


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    Yay!