Chocolate on ice cream with bright colored sprinkles
Cold lemonade that, too much, makes you tinkle
These are a few of the things that I savor
These are a few of my favorite flavors.
I love fresh baked bread covered in butter
Most anything with yeast makes my heart flutter
Candies that are given as party favors
These are a few of my favorite flavors.
I love fruit pies like apple and cherry
Shortcakes covered with juicy strawberries
When it comes to desert, I never waiver
These are a few of my favorite flavors.
When the days done
and the fat runs
up my thighs and bum
I simply remember it’s all behind me
and just leave my pants undone.
Author notes
A song parody of "My Favorite Things" from the Sound of Music.
Picture Credit: http://forgetmmenot.deviantart.com/art/Delicious-70824029
A contest entry
- My Favourite Things by Darianna.
525 points, ended May 15, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Just revisiting to make sure you changed your 'too'. Thank goodness, it was driving me crazy
Still delicious. -
It is 5am and your poem make me want some cake and cookies.....oh and some strawberry shortcake. I found myself humming while reading.
Yummy,
Cheryl
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When the days done
and the fat runs
up my thighs and bum
I simply remember it’s all behind me
and just leave my pants undone.
LOL LOL LOL
OMG I need to change my shorts!!
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LMAO Now I'm hungry Way to go big guy! Your poem is * yummy * lol
Linda
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Lol, is this the same contest I entered? I thought it was finished ages ago.
This is good, I like how you've changed it to flavors instead of things.
(line 2 - to, should be too)
(line 3 - should it be 'the' things?)
This is delicious, makes me feel like dessert. Your last stanza is hilarious. Good luck in the contest!
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