with my death
another is born
life continues
without me
Author notes
10 poets
10 words
10 minutes
Prompt~ Creation or My last breath
Rules you know them do not make me angry
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie 10x10x10 by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short, but made its point. Somehow melancholy.
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Great take on the prompt, though I'd be curious to hear whether this one was dark or merely realistic.. Since the curt manner leaves ample room for interpretation... Great write!
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i think i was going for how we work so hard to have great lives but in the end we all die and are eventually forgotten because the world moves on. so in other words i guess you can say it is dark and realistic! thanks for that comment bro bro!
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Thats not emo...
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I really like this one...wonderful write. you're really good at writing short poems, looking forward to reading more.
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I really like this one thank you for taking the time to enter my contest best wishes and much love always
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