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Final Breath

One final
Intake
Of hopeless dreams
Enters my dying lungs

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Prompt~ My last breath
Rules you know them do not make me angry

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    This is a nice take sweety thank you for taking the time to enter my contest best wishes and much luck always


  • coffeeangel316
    May 13, 2008
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    great take on prompt. good luck in contest


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 13, 2008

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    wow awesome... i love this......

    *squeezes out that final breath* and does CPR of ever lasting breath... that shall carry you till you ccan go on on your own... no matter how long it may take... lol.. great job on prompt.... good luck...