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Watching pain through glazed mirrors

Sitting on the edge of a breakdown
Watching slowly as the elements destroy
Their shells and soon they dig into 
The perfect crystal matrix of
Each other as they
Slowly let everything
They ever regretted out
Against the other
And now a broken
Shattered catharsis
Slowly begins

Now begins the work
Of slowly reshaping
Those beautiful
Intricate
Sacred shards
Into a
New cohesive
Whole
The humble
Work of a
Silent
Servant
Of unity
Has begun

Blow by blow
The pieces
Find their place
Back together
As the forces that
Broke them is
Found and
Resolved

Every
Little
Binding
Of each
Piece
Requires
The gentle
Guidance of
One and
The sweet
Acceptance
Of the other

Two beings
In a sacred
Conjunction
Bring together
What once was whole

Being the salve
That adjoins
And purges
Filling the
Cracks that
Were left
Behind
Always
Takes
More than
Just heart
The soul
Of the
Healer
Is one
That is
Replenished
Only when giving
Dying a little
To stay alive
Only the selfless
Can configure
The self 

Author notes

i ended up going somewhere else than i originally intended, if i get the time, i might redo it, or just try another similar, though if they're to alike i'll have to take one down...

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Comments

  • darkmindedfreak
    May 18, 2008
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    i like that! it has such a deep meaning


  • The Otep
    May 14, 2008

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    Don't redo it! I like the way it is (if you wish to do something similar, cannot change your mid.. ) Great job and I like it alot...