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butterfly

it flaps its
brilliantly colored
wings
fluttering from flower
to flower
then off
into the baby blue sky

A contest entry

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  • buffsab99
    May 22, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Beautifully descriptive write Best of luck in this contest


  • Swan song gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Very discriptive and a floucing style in the pome and wording that makes it seem like a butterfly fluttering through the air. Well done!!!!


  • Chrissy03
    May 15, 2008
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    very lovely


  • Candy6
    May 15, 2008
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    It is lovely poem


  • Olivias Violin
    May 14, 2008
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    "baby blue sky" - Nice!


  • bubble Bob
    May 13, 2008
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    Good

    Could almost picture that butterfly! Great job,keep writing.

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