I felt as though id known you
A lonely bliss staring through the glass
Untold by words your eyes have a story
I see the pain that runs deep in your veins
A free spirit bound by your own chains
Your hearts desire pours out yet you do not move
Lifetimes wasted with still rocks under your feet
Times beginning has past
Intentively watching as i fade away
Stranger like he, you remind me
And i know you
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Hi angelblueeyez
nice poem not getting the bliss part grammar seems wrong to me. Not sure though lol Other than that great portrayal of feelings. Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Hope you enjoy your stay here. If you have any questions about the site feel free to ask any of the greeters or I. We'd be glad to assist you.
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Cara
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cool i really like it
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I felt you had a lot of interesting things to say and you say it in a clear, understandable and pleasant way, I did not understand the 'he' in the second to last line though. I think you have talent at poetry.
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wow! i like this a lot!
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