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My family

My family.
They are my other leg
So much a part of me.
Every step I take
They guide me along.

My family.
Just one step ahead of me
In the path of life.
Glancing over their shoulder
To see me fall.

My family
Forgetting their path
That they are taking.
Reaching behind
Lending a hand.

My family.
Helping me to my feet again.
Not because of obligation
But because of love.
That,
is My family.

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A tribute to my family.

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    very good

    A very nice tribute to your family. It's great when people can be close with their families; so many families in this world just falling apart. Thanks for entering this nice poem in my contest. Good luck.
    Brian