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My Scars

The burdens I wear
And the lessons I have learned
Adorn my fragile flesh

Scars may make some hideous
But my scars
Define my beauty

Author notes

"The only beauty on my body
are the scars I made myself"
~Michelle Campbell~(yours truely)

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    June 8, 2008

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    Beautifu write! Scars are only marks but they can be beautiful..just like birthmarks.The lastline is great!


  • Velvet Rose Petals
    June 8, 2008

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    I agree scars are good. A sign of growth. I like the length of your poem. Flows well. Very well written.


  • Kathryn Bowden
    June 7, 2008

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    you really said a lot with just a very few words. nice job. Thanks for taking time to enter and good luck!
    Kathryn


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 14, 2008
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    thanks for sharing.. thanks for entering and good luck in contest.... great job