Ascending from lucid genesis,
she pulls herself upright,
Contorting elemental ethogies,
Exhaling pristine oxygen,
rushing waters glitters with sunlight
up and down her translucent frame,
deep green foliage terraforms upon her.
Opening magma veined eyes,
the geomantic deity finds another rebirth
under the sable of her blue and white atmosphere
A contest entry
- PIF - Picture Prompt by KayJay.
750 points, ended May 16, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful Poem
Congratulations on winning the Gold. You poem was amazing and filled with stunning imagery with your vocab choice. A pleasure to read.
Take care,
Sandy
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Powerful
I love the force you used in this... not only with words but images pulled into the mind. What a great take on the prompt. Thank you for such a wonderful entry... juding will conclude soon.
Ken
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Wow, great vocabulary. I loved the imagery, good luck in the contest.
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Great!
Really nice write here....I love the use of earthy elements in this poem as it lends quite a bit to the Geomancy theme. Every single line seems to include at least some concept that simply fits this mold. Not to mention a great use of vocabulary like usual.....very nice!
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