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Supper Soap Bubbles

Once there were some bubbles that weren't very bubbly,
So they went on a quest to be soap bubbles!
When they were in a cave searching for soap they were dubbly
lost than before!

But wait a light!
The bubbles might had found there soap,
they danced and pranced in the cave,
happy as can be!
"At last our soap we have found!"
cryed the bubbles out loud!


They were then called Supper Bubbles!

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Llama Salmon
very pointless i know!

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  • i LOVED it. totally random and 100% perfect ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

  • and since it has a meaning it's not POINTLESS.....or it was till i + ths..... ------> and ths <--------

    ------>ME<------- Everything points to ME!
  • Silverstar2.0.....control yourself!anyway.....I ed it.it was funny how ORDINARY bubbles were trying to find there soap.U know....whether u kw it or nt.....ths poem has a meaning.....do u see it???
  • Werido!Lol!Im sorry your no werido(sometimes) and I like your poem!
    By the way for poeple who think I'm mean I'm not I know her were best friends!
    *Random dance that I don’t know why I’m dance and yelling gogogogogogogogogoooooooooooooooooo us!yeah!Im so hipper so very very hipper!*
    *3rd comment dance with extremely long intro and just so awesome you have to dance too and say how awesome my comment was!*
    My comment was awesome right!??????????????????
    Hu hu huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu????????????????
    Guess what!Im..........Hypper!!!!!!!!!!!(not really.)


  • Oh yes, quite cute and funny.

  • I like bubbles and I like your poem have a nice night

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