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I'm Different...

  I'm different,

I'm the kind of girl who:

Will go out and dance like a fool in the rain
'Cause I don't give a damn about what you think of me

Will go up to you and ask you out
'Cause I'm not afraid of getting rejected

Will stay up till midnight reading
'Cause I erase the line between reality and fantasy

Will spend years sleeping
'Cause dreaming is the only time I can control what happens












Author notes

Option 2 - Short sweet and to the point.

Hey,

I am...

Hug.Me.Tighter

A contest entry

'cause i'm just not afraid...

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  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    June 3, 2008
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    YAY Gio!!!!!!


    You won!!!!!!!!!

    Congrats! You deserve it, jeje


    Ilyyy♥♥♥♥


  • Stormy Sky
    May 13, 2008
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    Will stay up till midnight reading
    'Cause I erase the line between reality and fantasy

    the reason i love these lines is because i'm that girl as well =^.^=

    I really like how you were straight to the point and gave a reason as to why you were the way you were. very powerful and lovely effect. Good write and good luck.

    ~stormy


    • Breathless Ballons
      May 16, 2008
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      Thanks.. I'm glad you liked it!

      and I guess everyone likes to erase the line between reality and fantasy...


  • paperbackwriter
    May 13, 2008
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    cool i really like it from what you say in your peoms you sound much like me


    • Breathless Ballons
      May 16, 2008
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      Thanks! lol.. It's cool we're alike! We should start talking more, we probably have lots in common!

  • Sunshine Princess
    May 13, 2008
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    I like your poem


    • Breathless Ballons
      May 16, 2008
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      Awww, thanks sweetie!

      Thanks for the clappy dudes!!

      And here's some huge for you tooo!!

      *hugs*

  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    May 13, 2008
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    OMG.....URS IS SOOOO GOOD>>>! i love it! jeje.

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