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Here I Touch You

 

 

Here I touch you--


in midnight's mumble

where wind is restless,
memories shimmer

like beacons of hope...


time,

in endless echoes,

melds moments with separation.

Hope hurries

to frolic with fortune
and stars sparkle

in southern sighs;
sometimes a wish  

rising, rising skywards.


Oh the dire prospect of future.
Unfulfilled.

Sometimes I dance

in dreams of unity,
cupping circumstance

in never and forever--


this is my need.

Here I touch you...


here I touch you

with faltering fingers,
I touch you

with yesterday's yearnings
and sometimes

my kisses vanish within woes
that weep

upon wisdoms unheard...


I hear myself

in silent slumbers.

My heart heaves heavy

when reality reigns;
my soul shatters and sobs,

searching to survive.
I touch what I can not reach--

 

you are not here...


My discontent damages

each newborn morn
and velvet hues embrace hurt,

to comfort.

Clouds reshape

to capture your essence,
warming my soul

as belief bends on moon's beams


and as I touch you,

 

wisps of wind
want to inhale you

in promises of perfection.

 

 

Author notes

~Know that my love waits here,
ever impatient and unyielding.

Inspired by Neruda

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  • The Slant
    October 26, 2008

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    the imagery is fantastic. i love the little inserts like "sometimes a wish." you utilize poetic devices very well. the alliteration has a great effect without distracting at all from the poem. very good poem.


  • Hetha gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    So beautiful, it makes me want to cry, but this isn't a bad thing at all. Another brilliant masterpiece from you.


  • Tercil gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    There is an atmospheric feel about this, almost spiritual and that includes the soul's apparent love trajectory. A splendid aura of charms that denote the more abundant trait of such a union. Nicely described.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 21, 2008

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    beautiful

    i have no idea who you wrote this for but they are one lucky soul to have this type of love offered to them. this is a beautiful write from you. congratulations on the silver trophy you have earned. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    Most wonderfully written
    A fine sharing in this contest!
    Thank you for being a part of this and for sharing your verse; I wish you all the best!


  • Naridill
    May 15, 2008

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    'w' always seems the most fluent and beautiful alliteration. I love 'wisps of wind' - simple but stunning.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    Wow this was so beautifully written! Loaded with imagery and deep thoughts. Loved these lines most

    " touch what I can not reach. You are not here.
    My discontent damages each newborn morn.
    And velvet hues embrace hurt, to comfort"

    An emotional write, so graceful. Good luck in the contest

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