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Risk

I'm surrounded by a fence,
that I can not see over.
I'm a little bit lost,
But why should I be? I'm in a box.

A swing in my backyard,
sways with the wind.
Never resisting the wind's tug,
never whining at nature.

What if I was in that swing?
Would it suddenly fall?
Or would I swing along,
no fighting at all.

I take a risk, and jump on the swing,
I push and I feel the wind in my hair.
I look and see the sunset,
so beautiful, magnificent, glorious.
I look and see the birds,
flying together like a family.
I look and see jealousy, courage, anger, frustration,
love.

So now I think,
so what if I fall?
I've seen the world,
I've seen it all.

What do you think?

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  • anon053641
    May 13

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    i love moments like this where everythings ok and your just free... the whole... i could die right now and be perfectly fine with that times...

    that and swings are fun

    nice write