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Broken dream

I woke
from a dream of deep unhappiness
A vaguely remembered heaviness lay on my heart.
Without registering the cause, the tears flowed,
my throat constricted.
I missed him
again.

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  • IntrinsicallyNoGood
    May 13, 2008

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    I love how you managed to capture the pain of longing and loss. You can interpret this in so many ways. You can envision the end of a relationship and hoping for a return, or the loss of a family member or a close friend. I love it! Well done.