we got in the shower
and turned on the heat
we started to make out
and i stood on your feet
we started to sweat
we started to giggle
i think your manliness
started to wiggle
i felt your breath
on the back of my neck
when i'm without you
i feel like a reck
we got out of the shower
and kissed some more
you started to thrust
my spirit soared
i got an orgasm
maybe you did too
boy, i love it when i'm with you
A contest entry
- In The Mood by WingedWolf.
600 points, ended July 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's all about love by Sound of Madness.
625 points, ended July 12, 2008, 76 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i love the action... it turns ME on
Comments
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Thanks for entering my contest. I think you could have been a bit more descriptive towards the end, but I enjoyed reading it. It's fun and cute. I wish you much luck.
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Its so, fun and young and fast paced. I really enjoyed it, it made me smile. God I wish I had a guy... lol
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lol I love this. It's cute. The way it is written gives me a sense of fun and giddiness. Great job and good luck.
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awh! I really loved this piece, it was sensual and sexual, just what was asked for
good luck in he contest, i think i was an amazing piece it ws a nice flow to read...
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