The woodbines entwine,wildflowers are in bloom
soft moss creeping on velvet feet
A distant bird sings "Tara Lynn
Sweet,sweet sweet sweet"
The wind sighs her name, it echoes through the hills
Her auburn hair is reflected from the sun and yellow daffodils
Silently she sits,cunning as a vixen in the glen
She is fair,delicate,lovely,a haunting illusion
the wood nymph Tara Lynn~
A brook caressingly sings "Sweet sweet sweet sweet
with an echo of rhymes
In a reverie of dreams she roams the forest
In misty appearance where the woodbine twines~
Looking down tangled paths each mystic night
Until mirthful breaths and fanciful breaths
Flee in the night~
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE/IMAGE PROMPT by imahealer.
675 points, ended May 27, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It's lovely. Congratulations on the Gold Trophy.
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congratulations on the gold trophy you have earned with this write. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Great imagery and nicely written. Thank you for sharing it with me, sis.
Best of luck.
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Very Nice sis, I can see why it has a Gold Cup.
Beautiful....Best wishes in the contest
Luv Ya Big Bro
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aw wow t wonderful poem so full of depth and amazement throughout congratulations on your shinymaralisa
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I like this, the imingery is great, word useage flows well, and most of the poem goes well with the picture, good luck in the contest
mm
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This is a beautiful imagery filled poem Susan and your words go great with the picture. Congratulations on winning the gold.
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What an absolutely beautiful poem and absolutely deserves the gold. Reminds me of fairy tales and mythology that was read to me as a child. Sweet and stunning it is.
~Amanda~
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Visiting a second time to admire and say how beautiful your poem is!
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Lovely piece.
Stunning imagery, great construction! Bravo!
Best of wishes
♥ Kate
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Wonderful
Great choice for the contest. Such terrific words. Best of luck in the contest. -
I can see why this took the golden cup. You did an amazing job here. Your imagery is wonderfully done. Congrats.
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Hey, this one is pure delight! I am borrowing it for Poetry Planet this night. Sweet! You have such a way with words.
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Congratulations on the gold! Well deserved....
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“In a reverie of dreams she roams the forest
In misty appearance where the woodbine twines~
Looking down tangled paths each mystic night”
What a vision. Sweet, indeed.
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Susan, no one writes fantasy with the feminine touches you do. The picture suits your words to a T! Ephemeral and lovely, my friend! I can almost hear her song whipering in the leaves.
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A very enchanting piece you have penned here. Lovely imagery of the wood nymph Tara Lynn. Well done. Juls
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amazing
that was certainly beautiful!....al the imagery was priceless....and I would say my favorite line was.."Until mirthful breaths and fanciful breaths/ Flee in the night."...........absolutely beautiful!...vwry well written!
-Lu
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Precious!!
Oh My Sis~ this is a Beauty of a piece You have penned
Love the rhyme also the images brought forth~
The message tugs at the Heartstrings
Love this!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Excellent!
Love this enchanting poem, Sis!
Looks like a winner to me!
BEST of LUCK in the contest!
Love Ya!
♥ Maureen
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this is such a beautiful poem...and Im sorry ive missed the tender poise you always shed to somber the soul...your beauty shines here susie...
may your halo turn golden
Hunk
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My daughter's name is Tara Lynn & she has red hair too.
lolol so funny sis!
Your words tell an enchanting story, and produce many lasting visions for the reader.
Good luck in the contest!
Love ya,
Jeannette
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You have such a wonderful imagination dear Susan. It's just lovely how you present us with those exquisite imageries.
Beautiful lines you have here.
Mari
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sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet. When you combine nature with fantasy, you do so well as with this piece. The "Sweets" made me smile. It does sound like a bird chirping.
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The visions you bring with this are so fitting to the image and the beautiful name Tara Lynn..I am awed!
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Excellent
Oh my sis what a great poem for the picture. Such beautiful descriptions. Best of luck in the contest.
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OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!!!! oh I soooo enjoyed this piece. You have done a fabulous job and as always you flow and imagery are spot on.
Delila
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Wonderful flow. You took this image in a direction I love. Your imagery is fantastic! "tangled paths of each mystic night"
You also leave a little suspense and let the reader finish the taler however he/she wants. Thank you so much for your entry and very best wishes!
Shana
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Blushfulmoon
All right This is a gold winner not no hm like you said. Excellent write Sis This is awesome. Shame on you for saying it should at least get an HM. *Shakes finger at you*
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