My hands hold
Maroon heart
Burning forever
Inside filled with
Darkest passion
Deepest desire
Always reminding me
My true love
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... come on!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i really like the passion in this piece. i love how dark it is. just a great piec
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wow thats deep
and lovey but its the right amount of lovey
congrats on that trophie
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i love the passion expressed in this piece. excellent take and a great piece. good luck
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Confuzzled1
thats a wonderful take on the prompt. Nice write Good luck with it. well done for so few words
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Darkly passionate and full of desire!! Wew need those reminders for sure!! Excellent take, thanks!
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