Embraced by golden flashes,
I steal one last taste of love.
Fire and passion,
erupt
in unison...
You fade away.
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... come on!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You did a wonderful job with the prompt.
Margaret
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Nice
Nice ending.
Be Well
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I like this! It burns and fades slowly away just like the poem. Well done and good luck!
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You captured the prompt so well. Best of luck to you!
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Excellent take!!! Full of passion and sensuality, then ending with loss... I love it! Thanks!
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great take on prompt.... good luck in contest.... thank you for sharing with all of us..... hugs......
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