Blaze kindled by Cupid's lantern
possessed of one thousand arrows
fashioned into one missile
gains pierced admission
to my heart
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... come on!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow.. really intense.. loved it!
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lmao - wonder who this is for huh?
that fat little dude rocks!!!!!
congrats on the gold
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WOOT!! You did great here sweetie.
L@@king at your new purdy trophy.
Congrats.
Delila
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Yeah! Congrats on the gold! Well done, Romeo!
Shana
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Great take on the prompt! Very original and cool! Good luck in the contest!
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Aren't you the romantic? I thought Cupid only had one arrow, but I guess with all the hearts he must pierce, he will need all 1000! LOL Great entry! Best wishes.
Shana
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Damn brilliant!! Send cupid my way would you?? lol
Love it!!
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No Cupid???
surely they jest lol This is a terrific piece of work!!
Linda
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I like your poem. Cupid is not a real person though he was made up to make more money at valentines.
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Not exactly true. People believed in Cupid a long time before there even was anything called valentines day. Some people back then said he was the son of the goddess of love.
Thanks
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Thank you
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