Licking my lips
I see your desire
anticipate lustful chills...
Sprinklers set off
as our bodies melt together
in passion.....
Author notes
20 words
Picture prompt
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... come on!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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Wishing for more words
I really wish you had been able to use more words for this one... you have an awesome start here for a really kinky longer piece... hee hee hee
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Yeah...I was thinking that too! I think I'll add more later!
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ooooo baby.... hehe..... great write.... good luck in contest... thank you for sharing this with us.... you did awesome.....
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Oooo darkly lustful!! Very nice indeed!! Glad to see a sensual take on the pic!! Thanks!
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o0o0o steamy I like it
Linda
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Very nice...a bit sensual and seductive, yet with a touch of darkness...very creative and well done...
Best to you!
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