Pulsating wildly
Throbbing
Burning
Holding on
Running away
Taking a piece
Of me...
...with you
Leaving me broken
Incomplete
Empty
Author notes
I'm not sure if this makes sense...
20 words
Pic inspired
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... come on!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1705 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is really sad and it does make sense hun... great job.. deserved betteri n my eyes..
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Although this is only 20 words, you made those few words so powerful! Congrats on the HM, you deserved it! You are an awesome poet and I can't wait to read some more of your poetry!
~ Bright Smyles
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really really good poem Katrina!!! It made sense to me even though I didn't see the pic hahaha. But really awestum write nice job!
*KT*
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wow that was really good sweetie! i think it goes perfectly with it.. you know you opened up a new image for me. well done!!
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sure does...!!!!!!! thank you for sharing this... its awesome... great take... good luck in contest.... hugs
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It surely does make sense and definitely goes with the pic!!! I've had that piece of me taken before...
Excellent, thanks
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wow this is good! Nice to meet you also.
Best of luck to you!!
Linda
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I'm glad you seem to understand it...I don't think I do
I can't read yours...I'm too young 
Good luck!
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