You took her
Heart
And set it in
Flames
Making her want
You
Touching her
Soul
With your every
Word
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10 poets
20 words
20 minutes
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A contest entry
- 10/20/20 ... quickie... come on!!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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First off I loved the pic!!
Favorite part:
"Touching her
Soul
With your every
Word"
Words can set you on "fire" better than touching if done right!! hee! hee!
Took a few words and ignighted a fire!!
your sis
darlintlc
xxxooo
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Good write here
Thoughts of many save your heart for words can be so disquised
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Red Hot, Baby!
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Very strong emotions expressed. Part is dark for me on first read, which is fine. I'm just normally unsettled with dark ... Good work on picture analogy. Keep up your great writing!
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I like this alot. It is not as dark as some you have written. HM? I think it deserved more. Great job.
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Wonderfully worded! Beautifully spoken! Well done and good luck!
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Ahh I know that feeling well.. or someone setting you aflame and making you want them.. touching your would... Beautifully passionate take!! Thanks!
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This is brilliant, great take on the prompt! Well done xxx
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oh this is sooooo wonderful. Best of luck to you dear
Linda
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