I am soft and delicate, gentle too
Shy and young and I appeal to you
With a pretty blush I catch your eye
I made you notice me as you went by
My skin is like velvet to the touch
Reach out, try, you will like it so much
Nuzzle your face up real close and see
Smell the musky perfume, that is me
Take me, pluck me, I long for you
Caress me, you want me, I know you do
The pink flush on me is sweet desire
I am just a warm bud not yet on fire
Unwrap me slowly, layer by layer
I’ll fill all your senses as you deflower
Peel away each petal and find inside
My inner core I have had to hide
I have waited for you to come along
For us to sing together a lovers song
I was your rose bud, fresh and new
Now I’m a flower and I belong to you
A contest entry
- Whispered Words of Sensuality by StormGoddess.
1000 points, ended May 27, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i really loved this poem i like how you were a bud to the man then in the end you were his flower i love this so much and it flowed so well and had great imagery you are awesome. Great write, keep on penning
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Well penned, you said it all so nicely
Good work.
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Such a delicate and sweet write on love and passion. The sensuality is soft and warming. Nicely done with this.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
This made me think of Citizen Kane when Kane whispered "rosebud" as he died...well done on such an image invoking write. Filled wit sensuality! Best of luck!!
Mylee -
Wow-this is a beautifully sensual write and so fits the prompt-I am in awe of this poem well and truly-
Well done babes-I can definately smell the roses!
xxx Love Hilly xxx
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That was so very beautifully penned
from a delicate perfect little bud
to a beautiful flower
the softness throughout
caresses the page
just gorgeous Little Moon
Niaish for sharing
this very special 'rose'
s and more s to you
*love Lib x x
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