The perfume on his pillow you recognize it well...
Just like the sweat on your bed as I can easily tell.
You are so lucky that you have him at your feet...
While feeling his kisses your heart faster beats.
The way you talk to him makes time get compressed...
I'm left in desire with my heart wanting to get undressed.
Who like you? ...
That every day you make his hot winds warm and cool.
Tell me who like you? ..
That for him there is nothing you won't do.
Just who like you? ..
Waiting on him even if it takes the end of time too.
Girl just let me know who like you...
That his eyes you turn from gray to blue.
Those nights of crazy desire...
Are taken completely without getting tired.
Also in his arms true love both of you show...
As God being the witness he even makes time pass very slow.
Together with in his and your eyes pure love brightly glow...
Bringing the fact that true love is all you both really know.
Both of your love is so special and deep...
When he's in your arms he silently falls asleep.
Waiting every night for his arrival...
Like a love created by the Bible.
Who like you...
How each day you can have him all day through.
My dear friend you're so pure and true...
Just tell me who else like you?
A contest entry
- Share Your Love by StarEyes.
2150 points, ended June 2, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Some people were born only to inspire.
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Wonderful!!!!!!
Now this is a love as pure as the sun. In the end everyone deserves a love like that. I hope that i find a love like that soon. You are still my amazing writer.
Always
~Amazing Angel~
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Maybe you already found it...
So... Who like you?!
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It is lovely, I miss him at nights my friend my lover is not with me.Thanks for reminding me of the good times. The great times we shared.
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My pleasure dear, my pleasure!
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wow.....*wipes tear*
Wonderful work. This is just....wow
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Wow is god enough for me!
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oh.... my.... as a tear falls on my keyboard. this was beautifully pieced together with words of such warmth and passion. a desire to love and be loved... *sigh*
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Your time will come princess.
(I told you you'll like it!)
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Well done
This asks the question for many at a time of loss yes indeed who like you
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Thanks for the divine comment dear friend! Much appreciated.
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What a lovely entry for this contest! Thanks for sharing this with us. I am sure this will mean a lot to Brenda..
Best of luck in this contest!!
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Thank you very much for the comment dear. I'm honored to enter the contest. Love you lots!
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Well. I must admit. I'm not one for liking rhyme much, though I will also admit I've been writing a bit of it myself. This flows very well, and it's made me think about some of my personal run in's with love and losing it, and just the infamous "why's". Nicely done. This is well thought out and deep, and very thought provoking (Though I'm sure I've already said that, I tend to repeat myself sometimes).
I can't wait to read more.
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I have many... So take your time!
Thanks for you awesome comment dear friend! Love you lots!
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