Burning brown eyes
Lushious red lips
beckon me to your call
as you grab me by my hips
Glaze into my eyes
as you tenderly sroke my thighs
Climbing on top
Revealing what underlies
Sinking deep, and heaving of chest
as you tenderly kiss my naked breast
take me in your clutches
and hold me near
hearing your heartbeat
make my worries dissapear
Author notes
Not too vivid, hope you like it
A contest entry
- In The Mood by WingedWolf.
600 points, ended July 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very sensual indeed. Great imagery. Good job and good luck.
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THank you very much
*love Lisa
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The last 4 lines flow really well. As did the rest of the piece, the end somehow just sounded really good and stood out. Beautiful work.
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thank you for your lovely comment
i'm really glad you enjoyed it
it made me feel really good..
lisa
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steamy
and good rhyme and nice flow. good luck in the contest.
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thank you im really glad you liked my piece...xxx
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