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Platypus Man

Platypus Man had no fans,
Except Spider Man,
Who like Platypus Man has no fans,
Because He won't tap it.

By this point in time,
No line has rhymed,
Except the one with Wolf Man and Toot,
The Wolf Man being of Aged asked howl you doing,

But back to the point
Platypus Man,
Fighting his arch nemesis,
The Band,
Began to play the Flute,

Unfortunately he stinks,
And flicked his wrist,
And said good bye to the flute,
Which hit Dragon Man,

Dragon Man,
Being friends with the band,
decided to eat Platypus Man,
This ending this bad poem for you.


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Lollipops kill small children

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  • LadyOfFate
    May 13, 2008

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    lol, it is pretty bad, but it is one of those so bad poems it is good. lol. thanks for entering and keeping with the theme! lollipops kill small children??? ouch..