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The Best Part of My Life

The best part of my life
Is when I feel you breathe
Feel our hearts both beat
And as we both relax

When I am in your arms
It's just like in my dreams
And everything, it seems
As though it isn't real

I'm painfully aware
Of every time we touch
And though it isn't much
It makes my heart beat fast

The way you look at me
Is nothing but intense
I'm left with no defense
Against your focused gaze

On foggy-window days
I always think of you
And how we never knew
How things would come to be

Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?

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