Hidden
Away in this world
Afraid
Of what others
May think
Fades away
Before they can
R e j e c t
Her But
If you look
Close
You might
Get to see
If your
Careful
And dont move too
Fast
Author notes
Picture Credit: Magic Mountain by Hans Peter Kolb
10 poets
no more than 50 words (anything less is fine)
Thank you! Winner sponsors next PIF please...
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A contest entry
- PIF - Picture Prompt by KayJay.
750 points, ended May 16, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Lovely
Tenuous and light, your words hold the hidden mysteries of nature and I find this very refreshing. Thank you for a great entry... Judging will finish soon...
Ken
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A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Nice form. Good flow and tone. Nice depth of feeling. Best wishes in the contest.
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Excellent
Excellent job on this prompt. I like how you have her hidden in nature. Best of luck in this one.
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I like this too and is an excellent take on the prompt. Good luck from me too!
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Wow, a very interesting take on the prompt, I like it. I love the 'slender' way you have laid this out.
(second to last line, I think the 'to' should be 'too')
Good luck in the contest.
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I I hear you here
I think everyone has a little of this in worrying about what others may think . But I have come to the conclusion that if I am pleased with myself then thats all that counts. There is no way to please everyone dont even try .Be yourself and laugh talk do things you know is right and if others dont like it they can go find themselves another muse .Cause honey this is me like it or leave it is my motto . You cant be what others feel you should be for the real you within tries so hard to get out and to cage that person within causes sadness and depression .Let the real you our and find life is a good place to be .
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A beautifully sad write. Best of luck dear.
Linda
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