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Just....thoughts

You've been following me with your eyes,
saying you want me..

You'll take me anywhere I want to go, huh?
Do you think your up for it?
Can you take me to that place I beg to go?

That place between heaven and hell,
where God's eye doesn't see.

It's where pleasure is pain
and pain is pleasure.

Where angels go to fuck demons,
and demons go to make love to angels.

Time there will slow down, fast forward, and
completely stop all in the same moment.

We'll go blind to everything but each other.
We won't live, or die in that place.
I can be your addiction there and you can be mine.

I'm willing to try if you are.

Just make your choice..
Will you fuck the angel in me tonight
or make love to the demon I can be?

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Just a few.. thoughts.

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  • DarkDominion
    September 13, 2008
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    Great

    Ya know that it takes Passion beyond measure to get there? Think he can get you there? ^_^

  • anon053641
    May 13, 2008
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    well it is interesting to think about isn't it

    nice write


    • Vera Jewel
      May 13, 2008
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      Well thanks... it's just kinda a rough draft of a poem I'm thinking about. Didn't think anyone would read it. Thank you for the comment