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End of Love

I have been
walking
along wet pavements,
paved and grey
in a winter day.
Walking
along lonely streets,
with the rain
over my heart,
as a wrecked man cry
under an empty sky.

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  • Jasmine 1
    May 16

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    Very beautiful

    A huge pain in your heart, perfectly described in this beautiful poetry. I like it so much.
    Kisses,
    Gioia

  • Touchof1der Moderators member
    May 13

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    Well done my fellow poet. You did a great job with this piece. Very descriptive and full of emotions. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet. Since you are new to our site, let me also say, welcome aboard! I hope you discover us to be a helpful and friendly place for posting your works. I encourage you to take some time to wander the site and check out all that we have to offer here. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact any greeter or moderator here.
    ♥ Touchof1der

    • Marvins
      May 15
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      TO TOUCHOF1DER

      THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT . I APPRECIATE IT VERY MUCH. MARVIN

  • Sexy-Black-Rain
    May 13
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    pretty