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Thoughts from Zen

Rage is like a swirling that engulfs the mind & spirit.

Clouds leave no trace in the sky,
so fragile,
just like my spirit.

Darkness engulfs those in fear,
but embraces those who are strong.

Fear is like a ghost,
it haunts you until its mission is completed.

Love stabs at the heart like a serial killer w/ a knife,
so deadly.

Rumors are like an uncureable disease,
it breaks you down & destroys you.

Knowing the intents of your heart is like understanding the brain,
it's impossible.

Ex-girl/boyfriends & friends are like sand in your eyes,
annoying & sometimes hard to get rid of.

People are like mirrors,you think you see one thing but it's totally different from the other side.

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  • Poetrybird86
    July 25, 2008
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    I really like this one. You speak of one thing and it relates to the other. The way you speak about clouds and spirt; fear and its relation to a ghost; rumors and an uncureable diease...and well you know the rest since you wrote it but its really good and I definitely like it