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I hate you

I hate the way you left me
standing there wondering
where you were going
and why you left
I look at myself
but I can't stand it
because I know
That I'm the reason you left
and it kills me Jerry...

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    May 14

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    Welcome to All Poetry

    A powerful deep and grasping poem that symbolises the pain and hate that a person has managed to leave in the path of your life. there are always those that will try to paint our skies black but sometimes by penning the emotions as strongly as you have here we are able to let go of them and walk away with a new smile formating on our face. a powerful write that is really deep from your thoughts and feelings. well done

    Charlotte
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