Mother Earth rise from your slumber
help us save you from the abuse you have endured
Show us the way to enlightenment
to be capable to live in harmony with you
Forgive mankind for our selfish devastation
of your beautiful lands
Grace us all with renewal
of your eternal soul
Author notes
Picture Credit: Magic Mountain by Hans Peter Kolb
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - Picture Prompt by KayJay.
750 points, ended May 16, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Well said!
As much prayer as poem, this is a wonderful take on the prompt... You made your point without overkill... a refreshing approach that I appreciate very much.
Thank you for a thoughtful entry... Judging will be complete soon...
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Wonderful take on the prompt, and such a truth in it. A beautiful picture and your words bring it to life! Well done!
Linda
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your kind words. We do need to take good care of her
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Amazing pic!! And perfect write for it! What we have done to this earth is a cryibg shame!
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Thank you
I agree, in the past 100 years we have destroyed what 500 million years created
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great take way different then mine lol... but i like... should have been posted on earth day for all to read..... awesome job.... thanks for sharing and goooood luck to you in this contest......
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Thank you
Thank you so much. The picture just tells my muse what to write
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Wonderful take on the prompt and an admirable message, good luck in the contest.
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your kind words
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Great job, my friend.
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Thank you
Thank you so much. This turned out much better than I first thought
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Oh wow was this ever beautiful and immensely creative. You created a land of deep thoughts, expressed with lovely imagery, definately pulling the beauty right out of the picture, as if a 3D form. Very well-crafted & original!! Good luck in your contest, definately worthy of gold
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Thank you
Thank you so much. I was unsure of this write, if I had captured it right
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