Stands majestic in haughty stance,
crowned splendor invisioned glance.
Heaven's backdrop blue sky above,
bountiful mounds formed with love.
Shapely peaks mid mountain sprawl,
picturesque view is nature's all.
Neath the clouds so billowy white,
Eyes cast upon this sumptuous sight.
Teasing beckoning tempting thrills,
allururing are these granite hills.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - Picture Prompt by KayJay.
750 points, ended May 16, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
Wonderful take on the prompt... The richness of your voice blends well with picture and teasingly alludes to the more obvious aspects of it...
Thank you very much for your great entry... Final judging should be done by noon (EST)...
Ken
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I loved this! The poem fit the picture perfectly! You have outdone yourself with this one! I think my favorite of yours so far!
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Lovely Comment
Good Morning Rob.
. Always so nice to get on in the morning and see a nice comment from you. Thank you for stopping by and reading.
Bless You,
Sandy
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This is gorgeous! Beautiful language and imagery, great take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for the lovely comment. I do appreciate you stopping by and reading my poem.
Take Care,
sandy
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Nice picture.
Superb take on the prompt. A lot of pride & supreme effort here. Fine work.
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Great Comment
Good Morning, Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Bless You,
Sandy
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This is a cute picture with changing aspect of how it is looked at. Can find something with eyes in the hills that look like an animal bending over. Consistently maintained use of poetic craft.
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Great Comment
Good Morning my friend. Thank you for dropping by. Hope you have a wonderful day. Thsnk you for the lovely comment.
Bless You,
Sandy
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It was really pretty.. I really liked it because it's so visual.
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for this nice comment. It is most appreciated.
Take care,
sandy
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Wow! I was just surfing and thought I'd read this. Wonderful Imagery,Vocab,rhyme. I liked everything about this write! Good luck in the contest!
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Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your very nice comment. You take care. Sandy
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