Wanting to be close
with a certain boy.
Brother standing in our way
shotgun in hand.
Thinking it's the end
of our fun and new us.
Saying it's time for a talk
brother sits us down.
Holding back the tears
scared there won't be an us.
Walking away from both of you
not knowing what awaits.
Thinking it's all over
being sad as possible.
Only to feel his touch
pulling me into a kiss.
"Not even your brother can keep me away from you."
Looking into his sweet eyes
knowing this boy will treat me right.
Please tell me what you think
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I give honest reviews of poetry from my heart
Most young people today thinks that if they dont have sex with their boyfriends they wont stay . Well this might be true but its when its after the sex you learn what that person really is . Refuse the sex if he pushes you for it you will know he isnt interested in you as he is making you believe .For the silver tongue of the male sex is not often connected to the real thoughts in his mind.He will say anything to get what he wants he becomes a master at it .If you are in school protect your heart from the boys just learning.Yes in school they are just learning sex and out to get as many as they can uncaring of the hearts they break .Your heart is falling fast but think if you listen and give in how far will it fall to think when he walks away and knowing he will tell all how it will shatter at that point. A young man who is truly wanting to know you and cares for you wont push you for sex hold your heart keep it safe for there is no pain like hearing the shatter and know you were warned
and ignored the warnings and your brother loves you or he wouldnt show he cares so much for guys knows about the other guys and what they are after.Be careful .



