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Apothecary

Rain is my lover.
Her tender mists bathe,
pouring round
and through
the silence in me
drawing an urge.
Arms of Clematis
wrap a soul,
sweet heady breath,
sighs
violet truth,
and love heals me
in the night.

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  • celticdreamz
    May 19

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    Clever title choice and I love your personification of the rain as your lover. "Pouring round and through the silence in me", "arms of Clematis wrap a soul" and "love heals me in the night" are favorite lines, but the entire piece is beautifully written poetry and a pleasure to read, Yellowdog! ~Elizabeth

  • ardentMarch gold member
    May 17

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    "and love heals me
    in the night."

    This is so beautiful. A lover, their arms are very healing...esp to one's soul..

    "Arms of Clematis
    wrap a soul," - you chose my favorite vine & this line I love as well...

    thank you so much for entering my contest


  • mjlovestheatlantic gold member
    May 17
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    Oooh how beautiful great job

  • Namita silver member
    May 14

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    Wow, this is beautiful... rain, a lover. Very beautiful, Geo! Reminded me of a piece by Mary Oliver titled something like "Last night, the rain spoke to me".

    I just love rain. Rain is my lover too, I should say! Good luck in Tara's contest.

    - namita