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The Question Why.

We live in a world of suffering
No matter where we turn it's there
We try to keep on living
In this world of despair
Now we ask
The question,
Why?

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Question to the Answer Why.
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  • hoodoolover silver member
    May 13

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    Nice duette, This one for me is more straightforward than the other, so I shall attempt this one first, lol.
    I see this as someone definitely questioning their own faith, and struggling to have enough of it to go on. Also a rhetorical question is the question why, as we all know the answer to that, it's "curiousity"
    Hope you enjoyed my interpretation


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    May 13

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    Very good duette! The frame fits the theme with giving it just enough 'openess' at the end to reverse the question. Cleverly and well written for the most part.

    Interpretation:
    The writer is being confronted with an obvious
    question while being honest enough to ask for the very reason for suffering and challenging life's circumstances. You address this well.:
    Thank you for entering!