Mom

Who's the one who makes me calm?
It's my spectacular, loving mom.

Who's the one who cares about you?

Who's the one who's "DA-BOMB?"

Who's the one that doesn't overdo?

It's my awesome mom!

She loves you day and night!

She makes your day bright!

She's always there for me.

Mom.

Mom is nice,

Mom is fun,

Mom was great since she begun!

She helps you with stuff everyday,

Please God bless her, I pray.

Mom.

Author notes

I'm 11 years old.

A contest entry

Contests for kids under 14:Write about some one you care for by pop123. 525 points, ended July 8, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Poetry Contest--For Children Up To Age 12 by kiwikrazi37. 450 points, ended August 25, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Redeemed15
August 20, 2008

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This is a great poem about and for your mom. I luv it. Great job with that award. And good luck in the other contest.
kiwikrazi37
August 9, 2008

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This is so sweet! Did you show it to your mom? I bet she would almost be brought to tears by this poem. Great job! Good luck in my contest!
- Slick99
  August 9, 2008
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  yes i did.
black hearted rebel
August 9, 2008
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Awwwwwwwwwww
This was totally SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!I LOVE YOUR POEM!
- Slick99
  August 9, 2008
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  thanks alot!
Melodies
August 8, 2008

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Any mom would be thrilled to get a poem like this from her child. I am happy reading it and find this poem to be written with skill and heart. BRAVO!
PianoMan
July 31, 2008

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This is a really nice poem dedicated to your mom. I want to write some poems dedicated to my family but I haven't been able to get them to come out right yet. Maybe someday I will. Great job!

She's always there day and night,
She makes your day bright.
She's always there for me.
Mom.
pop123
June 24, 2008

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Love the poem
Excellent poem,thanks for entering!
Good luck in the contest (though I dont think you'll need it,its already awesome!)
Sky Prince Ireland
May 13, 2008

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good job
An anthem for a Mother's Day poem I think. Written with deep sincerity, honesty and love. Your mom sounds like a wonderful person. Thanks for sharing.
Brian